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Commission from Sir—Raptor

"Adagio sitting at a desk and wondering how to get revenge on the Rainbooms. Adagio remarking if only they were as easy to deal with as mistakes while writing with a pencil. Unbeknownst to Adagio however the Humane 7 have been mysterious shrunken to a super smol size and are on her desk… and in the impact zone of the incoming pencil eraser wielded by Adagio. Said pencil eraser dwarfs them utterly and engulfs their field of view. They naturally panic at their incoming doom. Said doom takes a few flavors (alternate endings.) […]

Ending 2: Similar to the first ending. But instead of erasing their clothes the Humane 7 become 7 bloody smears on a spot of the eraser. […]"

Other endings:
>>2267582 Adagio's unperceived revenge Alt 1 by mythkaz

>>2267584 Adagio's unperceived revenge Alt 3 by mythkaz

The reason why I did 3 variants instead of complementing the ending was mostly for fitting options, the original idea involved having Adagio in last panel unaware of what she did, but I felt the plot could be rearranged to mention her intentions somewhere in between (doll panel) and just focus on the result to end the comic.

This version is my least favorite, as I normally don't enjoy drawing blood. However, a commission is a commission and this one doesn't gross me enough to not post it
semi-grimdark45953 alternate version99867 artist:mythkaz20 imported from derpibooru3801460 adagio dazzle19379 applejack241926 fluttershy312839 pinkie pie309313 rainbow dash338470 rarity263344 sunset shimmer97234 twilight sparkle433691 equestria girls315150 blood38058 book51535 comic155666 commission145858 commission comic82 crush561 crushed313 death7902 dialogue115828 doll7428 eraser344 female2083367 females only22213 humane five6500 humane seven4482 humane six6010 magic113286 mane six45337 micro14331 onomatopoeia10819 pencil5866 revenge1197 shrunken182 size difference26670 sound effects4990 speech bubble50061 splat62 table15924 tiny2673 toy29028 unaware836 word balloon326

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