This is try two, and I still don't like it.
Things are just not proportioned right, the twist is too much, the fingers are just bad, and the head is both too big and I forced an angle that just doesn't work I think.

Not sure if I'm going to go forward with this one. Might redraw it for a third time, might just try to fix it on the iPad.

Any way, this was going to be a base template to dress Rarity up in a bunch of different sports uniforms based on a suggestion from yangiscool
Ideas so far are Hoofball, Basketball, Tennis, and maybe others.