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I decided to make one of my oc a creepypasta but MLP. It's the same story from the Rainbow Factory, written by AuroraDawn, but it's a different universe.
Story—
His name is Lightning Star and he decided to help out Scootaloo with her flying test, but of course she failed. So as the others, and he knew that it was mest up how she only failed because she was only helping the other pegasus. So he decided to come along with her, even if he's grown and strong, but he wanted to stick with his friend, and so the other children. When they made it to the Rainbow Factory, they all soon realized that the Rainbow Factory is a evil place where ponies dies in able to make the rainbow. It surprised Lightning how Rainbow Dash is in charge of the facility, since they are very close friends.
Sadly, Rainbow cut off his wings so he won't be flying away, since he is strong like her. Each of Scootaloo friends die, Lightning was scared that he'll lose his best friend. With anger, he fought Rainbow and killed her by kicking and punching her, but also biting her on the neck hard as he rip her wings so she won't fly as he's attacking her. But as they were tossing and turning, Lightning and Rainbow fell in the pits of the rainbows.
Rainbow died of drowning but Lightning survived. But because of the rainbow, it made his mane turn the colors of the rainbow, and so as his eyes. But it also drove him mad. When he went back to Scootaloo, he soon realized how it felt great getting rid of Rainbow Dash, so that Scootaloo won't have to admire her anymore. Now they can get more closer than ever, maybe even become her older brother. He decided that they should stay and run the factory together, since Rainbow Dash is finally gone.
Scootaloo knew that he would kill her if she said no, so she agreed with him. Then Lightning grabbed Rainbow wings that was on the floor and stitched it on him. Lightning and Scootaloo has now finally become the new leader of the Rainbow Factory and no pony can stop Lighting Star from taking over the facility, and protecting her dear friend, Scootaloo.
End—-
Name: Lightning Star
(Drawing was on the Laptop by using Krita)
Story—
His name is Lightning Star and he decided to help out Scootaloo with her flying test, but of course she failed. So as the others, and he knew that it was mest up how she only failed because she was only helping the other pegasus. So he decided to come along with her, even if he's grown and strong, but he wanted to stick with his friend, and so the other children. When they made it to the Rainbow Factory, they all soon realized that the Rainbow Factory is a evil place where ponies dies in able to make the rainbow. It surprised Lightning how Rainbow Dash is in charge of the facility, since they are very close friends.
Sadly, Rainbow cut off his wings so he won't be flying away, since he is strong like her. Each of Scootaloo friends die, Lightning was scared that he'll lose his best friend. With anger, he fought Rainbow and killed her by kicking and punching her, but also biting her on the neck hard as he rip her wings so she won't fly as he's attacking her. But as they were tossing and turning, Lightning and Rainbow fell in the pits of the rainbows.
Rainbow died of drowning but Lightning survived. But because of the rainbow, it made his mane turn the colors of the rainbow, and so as his eyes. But it also drove him mad. When he went back to Scootaloo, he soon realized how it felt great getting rid of Rainbow Dash, so that Scootaloo won't have to admire her anymore. Now they can get more closer than ever, maybe even become her older brother. He decided that they should stay and run the factory together, since Rainbow Dash is finally gone.
Scootaloo knew that he would kill her if she said no, so she agreed with him. Then Lightning grabbed Rainbow wings that was on the floor and stitched it on him. Lightning and Scootaloo has now finally become the new leader of the Rainbow Factory and no pony can stop Lighting Star from taking over the facility, and protecting her dear friend, Scootaloo.
End—-
Name: Lightning Star
(Drawing was on the Laptop by using Krita)
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