On a far serious note, only one tenth of art's space is covered in ponies. You don't need to be a philistine to see how dreadful this is. This is not very affectionate of you, Moe guy, if you include this amount of ponies. The composition would be much more pleasing if you take more ponies and fit them in. Articulously, add more ponies to the left, to the right, to the center, to the the background. Only then it will be worth an exquisit review.

For now I am rating this art 6 out 10, calling it unfinished.