For the idea, it's okay. The armor is still a bit meh, though I like the knee and thighs, the rest is just blah. I didn't block it out right to really show the sword or spear, and I certainly didn't feel like drawing wings, so I didn't.
As for Markers, she's still too dark in all colors. I lightened it a bit in post, but boy howdy, there are a few characters I wish I had some slightly better colors for. Getting better at the inking though. Liking the smaller brush I moved to (cause I think I ruined the next size up using a circle template) but I have some work to be done on making smooth curves.