My fist oc and vector please comment the worst you have!

Name: Moonlight Dreamer (Generic name for generic cutie mark, just random things together, maybe somepony have done this combination) with the internal title of "The worst oc ever", do you thing so? is not so bad right? and the vector is ok i thing is based in a bad draw i did with zero inkscape experience. (justificandome a mi mismo!)

Gender: Female
Race: Alicorn
Basic backstory (in process, a little dark themed)
She is born in a "democratic" mini country outside equestria were they do not like the celestia-luna princess thing and hate all alicorns "demons" (sorry if dat had no sense, english is not my language), she was born of the president and her wife, and they decide lock her in the basement, the guards tortured her since very young withot the parents consent (they are no evil), the guards destroy her horn and wings (no ideas of how i will be look a wing tourture)… a lot of things happend eventualy she can escape to equestria and an orphanage finds her. A lot time later a lot of random magic happend, destroys the orphanage and discover she can enter in the minds of other to help in their psicologics problems, random cutie mark appear
(There is more but the basic is ok is not good and is not so bad right?)

Basic personality (somethings she do and like or not):
-Lonely (10 years in a basement do nothing for you)
-Patient
-She loves the night
-Reserved
-Shy and terribly traumatized for the torture